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Post by madhead on Aug 7, 2015 19:27:28 GMT
Show off ya talents ladies or gents
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Post by Moon on Aug 7, 2015 19:47:47 GMT
Show off ya talents ladies or gents Hmmmmm ... I am not very talented, but I do love poetry. Here is a poem I wrote. A simple kiss Engulfed in sudden desire as your passion sets me free, Within each breath of fire my skin begins to plea, Each stroke that intrudes sends me plunging into bliss, Lust filled heat within each moistened kiss, arching up my back to feel me stiffen on your chest, rocking up my hips to take in all the rest, juices dripping wet drenches the soul within, These moments held together truly my favorite sin, The moans held within my throat escape within my screams, As you bring me to a pleasure once held only in my dreams, As my body begins to pulsate I escape with a dizzying shudder, Held within true ecstasy with each gentle flutter, As I lay with all contentment hand in hand and palm in palm, Silence does surround us as our bodies calm, Slowly we drift to sleep after a night of tired bliss, all of which was started with a simple kiss. Diane Marie Chattaway Copyright ©2009 Diane Marie Chattaway Now let's see one of your paintings!
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Post by madhead on Aug 7, 2015 20:21:46 GMT
That's great Moon, I think I have a poem somewhere I'll have to dig it out had to do it for a course that I didn't finish lol. I can copy and pastr it on so I have put on my link instead We are waiting for Shell's Pics xox www.imagebam.com/image/8a4daa405803675
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Post by Moon on Aug 7, 2015 20:36:34 GMT
I absolutely LOVE that painting of leo you did. I do not think I could ever do something like that. You really are fabulous! PS. I edited your link so that it would show the picture. I will put a how to up in a little bit. Can't wait to see your poem. I am a sucker for poetry.
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Post by madhead on Aug 7, 2015 20:43:01 GMT
Yay thanks Moon. I think you could you are very creative you probably have just practiced other creative areas more and I practiced painting xox I thought how did that get there lol
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Post by kulsuzi on Aug 7, 2015 22:23:56 GMT
Madhead that pic of Leo is awesome! And Moon this is not a poem I should have read before my date this evening! How come I have no talent whatsoever? I'm Aquarius!!! Aren't Aquarians supposed to be creative??? LOL
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Post by madhead on Aug 7, 2015 23:19:32 GMT
Madhead that pic of Leo is awesome! And Moon this is not a poem I should have read before my date this evening! How come I have no talent whatsoever? I'm Aquarius!!! Aren't Aquarians supposed to be creative??? LOL Thank you lol I bet you have a talent somewhere even if you don't realize it yet I love Aquarians my friend was born on valentines day Found my poem though no judging about the grammar and punctuation that's not a talent I possess lol xox: Granddad's War Back at home, "Glad to be free?" As though I should be filled with glee! Don't want to talk. Just want to forget. Stuck with despair, fear and regret. Dreaming of fighting, war and strife. Then woke up a 2 am strangling my wife. Is there an end to this enduring stress? Without any help it's hard to redress! The full horrors that war has made. Parkinsons makes the memories fade. Is this the only way for me to gain peace? A reward and punishment, full memory release.
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Post by kulsuzi on Aug 8, 2015 1:11:29 GMT
That's a really nice poem Mad! :-)
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Post by Moon on Aug 8, 2015 11:48:23 GMT
Madhead that pic of Leo is awesome! And Moon this is not a poem I should have read before my date this evening! How come I have no talent whatsoever? I'm Aquarius!!! Aren't Aquarians supposed to be creative??? LOL I have no doubt in my mind that there is something creative in you! LOL, about the poem. Sorry your date went crappy. I'm sorry, but if he asked you out and didn't pay, and he didn't even bother to shower. I would not be giving him a second date! Eff that!
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Post by Moon on Aug 8, 2015 13:35:31 GMT
Madhead that pic of Leo is awesome! And Moon this is not a poem I should have read before my date this evening! How come I have no talent whatsoever? I'm Aquarius!!! Aren't Aquarians supposed to be creative??? LOL Thank you lol I bet you have a talent somewhere even if you don't realize it yet I love Aquarians my friend was born on valentines day Found my poem though no judging about the grammar and punctuation that's not a talent I possess lol xox: Granddad's War Back at home, "Glad to be free?" As though I should be filled with glee! Don't want to talk. Just want to forget. Stuck with despair, fear and regret. Dreaming of fighting, war and strife. Then woke up a 2 am strangling my wife. Is there an end to this enduring stress? Without any help it's hard to redress! The full horrors that war has made. Parkinsons makes the memories fade. Is this the only way for me to gain peace? A reward and punishment, full memory release. I absolutely adore your poem. Very realistic to what I have seen military couples go through. War changes people. I really kind of loved it! and as for the other. I do like to paint, and I have. I just am no good at details. Hold on, I think I have something on mobli that shows some of my paintings. they are crap compared to yours. I think I will stick with writing! Some Of my art - It's crap compared to yours
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Post by madhead on Aug 8, 2015 15:50:56 GMT
That's a really nice poem Mad! :-) Thank you kulsuzi xox
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Post by madhead on Aug 8, 2015 15:55:41 GMT
Thank you lol I bet you have a talent somewhere even if you don't realize it yet I love Aquarians my friend was born on valentines day Found my poem though no judging about the grammar and punctuation that's not a talent I possess lol xox: Granddad's War Back at home, "Glad to be free?" As though I should be filled with glee! Don't want to talk. Just want to forget. Stuck with despair, fear and regret. Dreaming of fighting, war and strife. Then woke up a 2 am strangling my wife. Is there an end to this enduring stress? Without any help it's hard to redress! The full horrors that war has made. Parkinsons makes the memories fade. Is this the only way for me to gain peace? A reward and punishment, full memory release. I absolutely adore your poem. Very realistic to what I have seen military couples go through. War changes people. I really kind of loved it! and as for the other. I do like to paint, and I have. I just am no good at details. Hold on, I think I have something on mobli that shows some of my paintings. they are crap compared to yours. I think I will stick with writing! Some Of my art - It's crap compared to yoursThank you moon Stop putting yourself down they are amazing painting is about artistic expression and imagination, it doesn't have to be detailed there are many famous artists that just paint stick figures, blobs, squares, dots (I could go on, lol) you go for it and keep painting
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Post by kulsuzi on Aug 8, 2015 16:04:23 GMT
Moon your art is great! Better than any stick figures I would draw! Lol
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Post by justsayin80 on Aug 8, 2015 16:41:06 GMT
Show off ya talents ladies or gents Hmmmmm ... I am not very talented, but I do love poetry. Here is a poem I wrote. A simple kiss Engulfed in sudden desire as your passion sets me free, Within each breath of fire my skin begins to plea, Each stroke that intrudes sends me plunging into bliss, Lust filled heat within each moistened kiss, arching up my back to feel me stiffen on your chest, rocking up my hips to take in all the rest, juices dripping wet drenches the soul within, These moments held together truly my favorite sin, The moans held within my throat escape within my screams, As you bring me to a pleasure once held only in my dreams, As my body begins to pulsate I escape with a dizzying shudder, Held within true ecstasy with each gentle flutter, As I lay with all contentment hand in hand and palm in palm, Silence does surround us as our bodies calm, Slowly we drift to sleep after a night of tired bliss, all of which was started with a simple kiss. Diane Marie Chattaway Copyright ©2009 Diane Marie Chattaway Now let's see one of your paintings! You wrote this ?!!! Wow beautiful very beautiful i love it You are you talented (build up that confidence)
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Post by justsayin80 on Aug 8, 2015 16:43:35 GMT
That's great Moon, I think I have a poem somewhere I'll have to dig it out had to do it for a course that I didn't finish lol. I can copy and pastr it on so I have put on my link instead We are waiting for Shell's Pics xox www.imagebam.com/image/8a4daa405803675Hi Madhead I have read the comments you post at times on JJ...is this one of your paintings ? It is beautiful and you have talent congrats I
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